How's this ?

It's going to be a very short post. I just want you guys to give a feedback on the photo that I edited based on one of the tutorials I had read. I didn't complete the tutorial but I did until a certain steps as I feel that my end results aren't as good as it was suppose to be. The example given and my end results were quite different. So, I decided to stop at a certain steps. What do you guys think about it ?

Please do tell me how to improve also as this tutorial's lesson is new to me. Thanks !

PS: Comment in the cbox also boleh.